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9/12/2012

8 Comments

Kaillya

9/12/2012 05:17:26 am

I liked it but you could have put more about you and your family.

Olivia/Yannik

9/17/2012 12:13:09 am

It was nice - Yannik
Cool - Olivia
You could put more about your family-Anon

ella

9/17/2012 12:16:35 am

good job! to improve this you should of used more pictures of your family.

Leo Forte

9/17/2012 12:16:47 am

It was very good and I can see you like fishing. One thing to improve on is to try and talk about where your from a little more

Kendall and Frankie

9/17/2012 12:17:41 am

Liked the cars. You could put more about your family

Mary

9/17/2012 12:17:47 am

I really liked your video but I think that you could have put in more photos and more text. I really like that you put in the things that you like and I think that you should look at your grammar and spelling.

Faith / Justine

9/17/2012 12:18:19 am

Nice job although it was kinda confusing. What cars are those btw. - faith

Good job we found alot about what you liked but you could have included more about your family because I only recall one picture of you family and where you are from - Justine

Kai

9/17/2012 12:22:44 am

I like how you should everything you like and sherish

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