L.

9/11/2012

7 Comments

 
7 Comments
Leo/Olivia/Yannik
9/12/2012 01:11:14 am

It was very nice-Yannik
It was beautiful-Olivia
We all really liked that because it was true and not fake-Leo
One thing to improve on is talking more about yourself, like what you like to do.

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Teo Doux-laplace
9/12/2012 01:12:29 am

Good job, the music goes with the background.

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Ella
9/12/2012 01:12:54 am

good job lil!!! thought it was amazing ! really liked the song choice and the way you used some pictures of when you were much younger! To improve this you could of maybe added more pictures of you at cane garden bay! :)

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Nick jowen kaillya
9/12/2012 01:16:17 am

great job lili i loved the editing and the vid awsome job =D

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Argyro/Faith/Mary/Justine
9/12/2012 01:19:30 am

Great job Lil!! Love the song choice little senorita -Faith

I like the fact that you included lots of different photos and your captions were really nice. But I think that you could work on the grammar. -Mary

I loved your video. I like the pictures you used and the message at the end. I also liked the theme you chose. You can work organizing a bit more though -Justine

Good job but I agree with Mary, I think that your grammar could've been better. Otherwise, great work! - Argyro

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kai
9/12/2012 01:20:21 am

Really great it shows who you are

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braeden
9/17/2012 12:24:05 am

good job

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